Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 5 and my teacher is Mrs Brown. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Wednesday, May 20, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Chydale,
ReplyDeleteYour story was fantastic! Great job! :)
to Chydale,
ReplyDeleteI like your story.
can you please tell me what happen in the mall?
next time you could make it make more sense.
Thank you Travis
OH there was a explosion at the mall and your not supposed to understand your supposed to be confused.
ReplyDeleteYour supposed to stay outstanded by the thing what happened.
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