Mallory
mcdonalad.
sleepover
with Eilish. Ring ring hi eili you know
about the coronavirus
lockdown yah, she says in a croaky voice well
we have to
cancel
our sleepover oh bother says Eilish.
you see what I mean I’m gonna
go sleep there's nothing else to do
and anyway it's getting
dark it’s a winter thing, you know
[sigh] blink blink still night hey
what's this giant box doing here and it
has a note on it spaceship to
bookworld ahhhh but I dont think
this is a good idea click….. but my
moms always telling me to read she
would love for me to go to this book
world it doesn't look to harmful I
slowly get in to examine it but before
I can get out it zoomes out the window
beep boop beep boop my name is bt327
and I am your tour guide and
transportation to the world of
books is there anyone
you would like to take with you
ahhhh, you are only aloud to take
two people ahm
this is a hard decision okay okay
I will take Sophia and Nikita. okay then
first Sophia’s house we stop by
Sophia’s house and go in through her window
weeeeeee this is great so far I
jump up next to Sophia's bed
silently trying
not to wake up lucy, Sophia
Sophia wake up she opens one
eye to see who
it is how did you get inside doesn't
matter i'll explain when you get in
the rocket okayyy…. i'm still getting
used to her but this is my rocket bt327
let's head to Nikita’s house. While we
zoom up we go deeper into the rocket
a kitchen a bathroom and three rooms
we also find a pool and a mall actually we
find a few this rocket is even more fun
than any book world oh yeah soph we are
going to book world and i'm aloud to invite
you and Nikita it's gonna be so fun we
arrive at Nikita house and knock on her
window knock knock she manages to mumble
whos there and we both say your friends
she open the door and joins us in the rocket
we’re going to book world if your interested
hop on board of course she’s
interested the rocket tells each of us to
pick a book we all start talking
bla bla blo blop bleep bt327 says in a
loud stop with the bla bla you
have five choices since we are three
people we choose three world
of Mallory the world of harry potter
and the world of raina okay
let's go first stop Mallory mcdonald I
click a button on the wall and
it asks me what kind of icecream I want
vanilla with caramel glaze
and choco sprinkles and a strawberry
waffle cone ameddently there’s
a poof and my request comes out of
nowhere we are here says bt I
open the door and Im in fern falls and
I can see a row of perfectly
white houses with black doors every
house on the block looks the
same bye I say to my friends I see a
letterbox with the number
seventeen I am at 17 wish pond road
If you’re wondering why
the road is called wish pond road it's
because on the road there
a wish pond you can make a wish and it
might come true Mallorys
made a wish and it came true I pull
together the courage and knock
on Mallory's door instead max opens
hello we are looking for Mallory I
say in a small voice you must be Chydale
yah I came to see Mallory when Mallory
hears her name she rushes to the door
hi Mallory hi she says in a cheery voice
come in come I rush up to Mallorys room
where we will be staying for a week first
step of our mission is to paint Mallorys
room purple squee this is going to be so
fun I look out the window and see bt327
zoom of bye bt come back soon I whisper
we paint the wall purple and go to joey's
house to see Mary ann hi Mary ann I say
and give her a big gigantic hug hey hey hey
she says Mallory and Mary ann say everything
three times Mary ann and Mallory and I walk
back over to Mallory house we go up to her
room and do a group hug we are going to have
a triple sleepover and it will be so fun we paint
our nails purple since purple is all of our
favorite
color then we head to the mall and get
matching purple pj that say bff on them
this is the beginning of our amazing
sleepover before we go to sleep we read
Mallory's diary and then doze of to sleep
actually we don't for the whole night we
chat we chat about this we chat about
that then we go to sleep but at like
1:00am and that's late the next day peanut
butter marshmallow pancakes i’ve always
wanted to have these I tell Mallory they
are my favorite she says then we see
Chloe jennifer hey Chloe jennifer this is
Chydale Chydale this is Chloe jennifer
you might be wondering why Chloe
jennifer has two names i’ll explain why
you know how Mary ann is Mary ann not
mary or anne that's the same way at
that moment I get a phone call from
Nikita I’m at hogwarts squeeze then
Sophia calls and says she having a sleepover
with raina it sounds like they are having as
much fun as me at the end of the day we go
over to the wishpond I find a black pebble
and throw it into the pond and make a wish
I wish that I can three more wishes suddenly
I see three more black pebble stones I give
two to my friends and keep one with me this
is how the rest of the week went
in up the st who’s name is nancy fancy nancy
have a lot in common but I suck at video games
business with Mallory page 75 its the best
but different Mallorys room is purple we
don't only do makeup , hair + nails we do
outfits of the week pamela goes home
looking perfectly purple she’s wearing
a purple hat with a purple flower she
has purple lipgloss her nails are purple
too she is wearing a purple top and blue
jeans with purple polka dots she walks
of we make 63 dollars
gonna miss all of them we say goodbye
and group hug
Wow Chydale - what an amazing effort! You have sone some very creative writing and sounded like your characters had a lot of fun.
ReplyDeleteDo you like reading fantasy stories?
I know it is fun to use different fonts but the one you used is quite hard to read and made your post very long - maybe you could try a more basic one next time.
hi mrs earl thank you for you comment next time i will defintly use another font thank you again for your comment. Chydale
ReplyDeleteyes I most defintly like fantasy storys. Chydale
DeleteHi, Chydale I like how Nikita and eilish are in the story, I like how creative it was and how many words you had done when I first saw it I was shocked I mean WOW I can't believe it! anyway this is my question for you how much time does it take to write that much words?
ReplyDeleteHi Natalia thank you for your amazing comment it took me the whole afternoon I'm just happy I have no spelling mistakes.
DeleteHi Chydale
ReplyDeleteYou sure have been very creative with your writing today and it was nice to see that some of your characters are based on your friends names.
You mentioned a wishing pond in your story that could grant you one wish. If you got to make a wish in this pond, what would you wish for?
My wishes to come true whenever I want wherever I want do you have a wish ball that can grant my one wish. Thanks Chydale
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